I really like the background art and the ship's art. The animation of the mermaid was good, but could be less stiff.
I really like the background art and the ship's art. The animation of the mermaid was good, but could be less stiff.
Thanks!
There's so much I wanted to do with this, but I only had a week to build the character, animate, make the background, make the ship, put in the effects, record the voices, do the sound-editing, make the credits, and comp everything. I don't think I have ever worked so fast in my life lol!
I actually didn't have a title for this the entire time I was making it - whereas I planned my other film's title during pre-production, because I had time to sit and think. Two minutes until the deadline, I was sitting there, staring into After Effects while thinking "Oh geez, this needs a title or else my teacher is going to kick my buns". I decided on the first thing that came into my head. Flop. Because "she flops, and this is going to be a major flop". To my surprise, everyone in the audience laughed - thanks to that beautiful one-liner my friend cooked up on the spot.
Really incredible art with the backgrounds, freeze frames, and lighting. Clever and funny rhyming and overall really entertaining.
Really nice colors and the ability to tell a story without words was well done. The only nitpick I have is that the background art could have been more detailed. Maybe have more shading or better perspective. Besides that, I thought it was well done.
Cheers Flumpy! We'll be sure to look into more detailed backgrounds in future animations. I appreciate the review.
Good animation and thoroughly entertaining with its nonsense.
Thank you!
Entertaining and well animated. I enjoyed the sound effects you put in, but some were just a bit too loud compared to the Nerd's voice. The frame rate was slightly too low to me. I think if you just had some more in-betweens in there to keep the framerate higher, it would be less distracting. The actual animation though, was well done and creative. I liked it.
Some great mouth animation. Overall, creative and well done.
I wasn't expecting this to be animated so well. Good job.
Thanks man, it wasnt really polished, but since I did it for doodles I decided to publish anyways.
The animation isn't too good, but I do like the punchline. You have potential.
Thank you... I wanted to have a cartoon on the NG more than I wanted to make a crispy cartoon but I will never stop
Pretty good.
Thanks pal
I like the animation and music, but the voice acting could be better.
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