FlumpyTripod's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Prison of the Clairvoyant]

I love the animation in this. The watercolory backgrounds were great as well. Great job.

[64 Bits - Intelligent Life (Pikmin Parody)]

Really like the style. The little touches like the log rolling slightly as they jump on it were great.

[Don't leave your Pokemon alone]

Really well animated.

[Three Friends Have a Nice Time in the Park - NUTS AMUCK #1]

I think the main issue I have with this is that the Policehorse appears too quickly. There isn't enough time to establish what is going on before he appears, so it took me a minute to realize what was even happening. The voices were alright, but I'm not a fan of pitched voices.

Overall this was fine. I think if you just took a little more time to establish the critters playing before they get interrupted, it would have worked a lot better.

emergencysquirrel responds:

Thank you for your response. I really appreciate the feedback. Of course the secret of comedy is .... timing... which is something I work towards always. Cheers.

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[The Bird Of Truth]

I actually really liked this. The animation isn't spectacular, but for what it is, its good. I thought the initial animation of the bird sleeping looked really good and smooth. You clearly have an understanding of ease in and ease out.
Good luck on your future work because this is a great start.

[Light Of Life]

Really well done. The animation was very impressive aside from a few little things could have been fixed a bit, but overall really good animation. I think the biggest thing for you to work on is the audio. Some of the audio seemed kind of low quality and I think some of the sound effects were not quite the right choice. Really well done overall.

[Pulchritude]

Really like the colors and background art. The animation is good. I see that you attempted to have some secondary motion with the girl's hair, but it stops moving at the same time as the body. If you just let the secondary motion end in its own timing, I think your animation could look really good. A little secondary motion goes a long way.

Sage-Kro responds:

Thank you!
This was my first ever attempt at animation, so there are LOADS of mistakes haha