Really creative storytelling and great artstyle. My only complaint would be that the animation in the beginning could be smoother.
Really creative storytelling and great artstyle. My only complaint would be that the animation in the beginning could be smoother.
Hey! I appreciate it. Yea I couldv'e tweened everything but the choppiness was intentional. It was supposed to emulate the old, cut-out paper animation style and also make the "dream" part of the piece stand out that much more. So I pretty much just did the essential poses to get across what I needed.
Looks good. Really like the backgrounds
This is the kind of 'Animated' that I really like. It doesn't rely on the audio to be funny. The visuals add another level of humor to it. The animation was fucking great and the visual humor was creative and hilarious.
Damn, this is amazing. The backgrounds look simple and great, and the way you animated the fire was fantastic. Also the audio editing was very nice. Great job.
Thanks a bunch! I tried to find a way to make all simpler to make, since I had to go fast to make it for my delivery date. The audio editing was made so fast, it's ridiculous, ahahah.
Really compelling dialogue and nice drawings, as to be expected from you.
Awwww, yooouuuuuu!
Funny. The dialogue really carries the story, and the quick editing really helps.
Thanks. :-) I will always admit I am a crap animator and I don't really aspire to being an animator because it's hard and even simple animations can take forever when they are well done. Anyway, I am more of a closet cartoonist and humorist and I mostly do all this for fun and as a hobby. :-)
Not bad. I see a lot of potential coming from you in the future.
Thank you this means a lot to me!
I really like the constant motion going on, but it could look cleaner and smoother. Overall, it's pretty good.
Thanks. On the other site that I got the sound from, I showed this to some folks and they ripped it to pieces for the constant movement. They think it's floaty and all over the place and shows no fundamentals. Very interesting.
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