Really nice lighting. Intriguing narrative.
Really nice lighting. Intriguing narrative.
Thanks Flumpy
Simple, but good.
Really nice style. The 2D and 3D blend together really well and the sound effects were really distinct and effective. You were able to clearly convey a lot without any dialogue. Well done.
Really funny up until the song, which went on for too long. I think if you would have had something happening while the song occurred, maybe it would be funnier.
Nice animation. There's a nice flow and movement to everything. Reminds me of the CN bumpers back when Regular Show still played on CN.
You animation for the wolves is good, but slightly awkward, which you can easily rectify with more experience. There are also unnecessarily long pauses between each line of dialogue between the characters, so you just need to clean up the pacing there. My biggest issue is that the story seems too similar to Avatar: The Last Airbender. This is just the prologue, but it does seem like Avatar, but with wolves. I don't mean to come across as too negative about your work, but I think with a little more experience and originality, you could make something really great.
Keep making stuff and I hope to see your work in the future.
The sheer amount of variety and speed at which you shove jokes into these things always astounds me. If one joke falls flat, there's always another one just around the corner to pick things back up.
That face slap and car crash were hilarious. I really like the simplicity of this, in both the art style and the plot.
Don't let the sludge run sour.
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