FlumpyTripod's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Demonliane whip him forever]

I don't understand what this is. This is basically the same thing as your last video, but with some dialogue. Why not just compile them into one video?

[april 1 but its late cause i uploaded it on my yt channel]

So, when did you miss the bus?
The audio was kind of quiet and I would suggest maybe having a cleaner drawing style. With such simple designs I don't think the sketchy style really works that well with it.
I not a huge fan of these kind of videos, but I thought it was overall fine.

JustAnOrange responds:

sorry wrong file

[Three Friends Have a Nice Time in the Park - NUTS AMUCK #1]

I think the main issue I have with this is that the Policehorse appears too quickly. There isn't enough time to establish what is going on before he appears, so it took me a minute to realize what was even happening. The voices were alright, but I'm not a fan of pitched voices.

Overall this was fine. I think if you just took a little more time to establish the critters playing before they get interrupted, it would have worked a lot better.

emergencysquirrel responds:

Thank you for your response. I really appreciate the feedback. Of course the secret of comedy is .... timing... which is something I work towards always. Cheers.

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[The Bird Of Truth]

I actually really liked this. The animation isn't spectacular, but for what it is, its good. I thought the initial animation of the bird sleeping looked really good and smooth. You clearly have an understanding of ease in and ease out.
Good luck on your future work because this is a great start.

[Light Of Life]

Really well done. The animation was very impressive aside from a few little things could have been fixed a bit, but overall really good animation. I think the biggest thing for you to work on is the audio. Some of the audio seemed kind of low quality and I think some of the sound effects were not quite the right choice. Really well done overall.

[[ASMR Animated] Tapping Softspoken Whispering]

Great punchline

[Pulchritude]

Really like the colors and background art. The animation is good. I see that you attempted to have some secondary motion with the girl's hair, but it stops moving at the same time as the body. If you just let the secondary motion end in its own timing, I think your animation could look really good. A little secondary motion goes a long way.

Sage-Kro responds:

Thank you!
This was my first ever attempt at animation, so there are LOADS of mistakes haha

[FLOP!]

I really like the background art and the ship's art. The animation of the mermaid was good, but could be less stiff.

Sage-Kro responds:

Thanks!
There's so much I wanted to do with this, but I only had a week to build the character, animate, make the background, make the ship, put in the effects, record the voices, do the sound-editing, make the credits, and comp everything. I don't think I have ever worked so fast in my life lol!
I actually didn't have a title for this the entire time I was making it - whereas I planned my other film's title during pre-production, because I had time to sit and think. Two minutes until the deadline, I was sitting there, staring into After Effects while thinking "Oh geez, this needs a title or else my teacher is going to kick my buns". I decided on the first thing that came into my head. Flop. Because "she flops, and this is going to be a major flop". To my surprise, everyone in the audience laughed - thanks to that beautiful one-liner my friend cooked up on the spot.

[The Tweet Before Christmas]

Really incredible art with the backgrounds, freeze frames, and lighting. Clever and funny rhyming and overall really entertaining.

[Desolation]

Really nice colors and the ability to tell a story without words was well done. The only nitpick I have is that the background art could have been more detailed. Maybe have more shading or better perspective. Besides that, I thought it was well done.

Avonom responds:

Cheers Flumpy! We'll be sure to look into more detailed backgrounds in future animations. I appreciate the review.