FlumpyTripod's art Reviews on Newgrounds

['Klerpo']

Really like your art style. The neck seems a bit too stiff to me. I think giving it a bit more of a springy bounce would really push the liveliness. The way the head bounces back to the front, doesn't seem to be reacting to anything, just arbitrarily shifting back to the front. I think having it be more of a secondary motion from the main body's movement would help. I like the way the feet are animated a lot. Not to be too overly critical, just some observations.

Butzbo responds:

That's a fair point I'd say, the intent was to have the whole head react as a follow-up to the body, but it could have been more pushed indeed. I always appreciate Newgrounds for the eventual constructive criticism. Thanks!

[Dragon]

Damn, nice shading

ExtinctionArts responds:

Thanks glob

[grease]

Ooh dynamic pose and real good colors. I like how restrained the saturation is, it makes the brighter parts pop even more. You can really feel the energy.

vinnx4 responds:

tysm flumpy! thats exactly what i was going for with the colours hehe

[Bone Dead Tattoo]

I actually really dig this. The colors and shading look really nice

ExtinctionArts responds:

thanks big brother :o

[sad aesthetic]

Cool aesthetic

turret-heads responds:

Thanks!

[Klanky Swanky]

I like your spindly artstyle. Nice form to it.

BlabbyTargins responds:

Thank you so much!

[He The Protector]

Oh god.

KatScratchBabe responds:

god will not hear your prayers here

[Destroyed Realities]

Really nice colors

Laxianne responds:

Thanks !

[DAY 13'fluffy extraterrestial]

I think if you pushed the pose a bit more it would really make it look great. Really extend the arms out. Things just look a bit cramped with the arms so close to the body. Also, if you have the ability to, I would edit the photo to up the contrast and/or lighting to make the drawing pop more.

On the more positive feedback side, I like the art style you have and the character design works well.

Rejectdoodles responds:

Well Thanks,actually i did edit old picture to Made them pop out,but i stopped since o assume that everyone had the brigthness at max.
Also sorry,but i can't visualize the thing your talking about with the pose,i apretiated the advicr,sadly i don't understand it very well

[Angry Drake]

If it was complete, it would make it great. Just finish the whole drawing and I think it would look really nice. Having a portion of the drawing incomplete just looks weird.

ExtinctionArts responds:

Yeah, was thinking about that but didn't wanna work on it anymore. I'll probably do a whole finished one.